http://forum.spore.com/jforum/posts/list/71756.page thats the link to my story I am working on it. Tell me How its like. I need some tips to help make this story even better!"

I like it, needs to portray my spore universe a little bit better, I keep find planets populated by monsters that look oddly familiar.

well... it's not terrible. Try practicing your punctuation.

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“A scattered dream that's like a far-off memory... a far-off memory that's like a scattered dream... i want to line the pieces up... yours and mine.”

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