Since several people have been sharing their music here in the Studio thread recently, I decided to grab an old MP3 file out of my computer library and put it here. It's an old song of mine from 2010. Nothing special.

The program I composed the track with is FL Studio 9. I've only messed making music occasionally, and not very often. Drawing is more of my talent.

Since December 2007, I'm still learning how to fully use the program and it's features.

This track works pretty much as a one-minute loop.

http://soundcloud.com/pixelknot/ninja-returns

I heard your track, and I have to say, you're doing fine so far, but I gotta tell you some things.

First of all, I notice the lack of a bassline in your track. Most of the bass seems to come from your kick drum. This can be fixed by adding a melody or a stream, using a bass sound.

Then, I'm not sure about some chords you used. Some parts seem to sound a bit wrong. I would check the harmonies.

But other than that, I would probably make the track a bit less loud. After all these three fixes, your track would be much better. Right now, it has potential to become a nice one. Feel free to continue it!

I'm now following you on SoundCloud.

I've started working since november 2009, using FL Studio 10 and a couple external VST plugins. I have nothing really worth showing as we speak, but I'm working on a remix from a Skrillex track. My remix won't be dubstep/electro though.

Sounds expressionistic. I can't really tell what you were going for but with a little practice and a sound structural foundation, it could be molded quite nicely.

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I thought it sounded cool, not something I would listen to but it would definitely fit in a game.