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Snail Presents: Short Stories
Old 03-19-2013, 07:57 PM
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The Experiment
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The Alchemist
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A poem
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The field
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The Cursed Snow Elves
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Old 03-19-2013, 10:19 PM
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short store oestrogen y generan jobe servica!
Escribe en ingles, por favor.

Guys what do you think? Want me to keep 'em coming?
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Old 03-19-2013, 10:40 PM
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I like it, bring on more.
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Old 03-19-2013, 11:19 PM
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Topela Snail! Hablas espa?ol chele?
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Old 04-02-2013, 10:32 PM
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New short story is live. No more spanish. Give me feedback plsssss
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Old 04-02-2013, 11:07 PM
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Not bad. Not bad at all.

A great start so far. I'll be interested to see where it goes next.

PS No more Spanish guys. This is an English-Only forum.
Old 04-02-2013, 11:09 PM
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Theyre not related in anyway by the way.

Also thanks kin! <3
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Old 04-02-2013, 11:16 PM
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I enjoyed the second one alot, keep them coming.
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Old 04-03-2013, 03:22 AM
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Still love how you specify the details of what's going on in the scene as you tell the story, especially in the beginning paragraph.

And the writing itself is pretty solid and decently written.
Not bad, Snail. Good work.
Old 04-19-2013, 06:53 PM
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Got a new one up
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Old 04-20-2013, 10:31 AM
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Short, but great nonetheless.

I'm pretty curious about that "one" unfortunate event and how the alchemist's wife died in the first place.

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Old 04-20-2013, 05:33 PM
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It was his daughter when i wrote it. Im leaving what happened up to your imagination
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Old 04-21-2013, 11:03 AM
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Although they are short they manage to captivate the reader and tell a pretty fascinating story... Remember lenght isn't the only thing that matters... XP

A really good job...
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Old 04-23-2013, 02:55 AM
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I really like the little paragraphs. They're great introductions to what could be a larger story.

You should definitely try writing a full narrative.
Old 04-23-2013, 02:56 AM
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But im too laaaaazzzzzyyyy
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Old 05-02-2013, 06:38 PM
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I posted a poem
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Old 05-02-2013, 10:23 PM
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Nice poem.

I've always been terrible at poetry.
Old 05-03-2013, 01:34 AM
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i just put ya stuff on my kindle. i hate to read on a monitor screen XD
btw. whats the title of the first one?
Old 05-20-2013, 04:19 PM
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updated with a new poem
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Old 05-20-2013, 07:50 PM
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Dat imagery.

That was really good. Could've used some more descriptive words here and there but that can be easily fixed.
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The Field was another great read. Keep it up.
Old 08-21-2013, 04:21 AM
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Bump Yeah I know thread revival after like 3 months of death...
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