heres my book so far.
WARRIORS-
A New Beginning??
By Jonah Mensch



Dedicated to myself in the future, my brother Noah, my friend Scott, and my Mother













Chapter 1: Clans

Jay Meow lll woke up. He had had the most horrible dream. He walked over to the cable clock. It read 12:00. Midnight. Thought Jay. His stomach growled. He looked over at his pregnant wife Heather with their four kittens. Jay was like any white shorthair cat, exept his ?thumb claws? were a solid, stainless gold. ?You don?t see that every day. Exactly the reason we?re getting him!? He still hears the words his owner said when he got him echo in his ears. I think I?ll go catch a mouse. He thought.
He went outside. It was a cold night in Pennsylvania. He heard a rustle going into the woods. Jay followed. He saw a flash of gray as Jay passed the fourth tree in the woods. Five. Six. Seven. Eight. I got to speed up if I?m going to catch that? that? that? mouse. Eww and yum. Looks disgusting. Tastes great. Oh no I?m talking to myself again. Heather?s going to be furious. Oh who cares. Jay thought.

Jay decided to go back inside. He wasn?t hungry anymore. He forced his toad-green eyes closed. Then Heather woke up. ?Heather. Kitten but possibly kittens coming in two days. Rest.? Jay announced coldly. Heather said nothing and stroked James, the oldest kitten?s back. ? Look at the mice out there.? Heather exclaimed. Jay saw at least six or seven mice out there, noisily squeaking. ?Squeak!? Heather imitated. ? I know. It?s noisy out there but you need rest for the kitten.? Jay pointed out. ? O.K honey. Yeah I should. I did it with the other four.? Heather yawned. Heather was fully asleep in one minute of staring and stalking from Jay, making sure she wasn?t faking. Jay wasn?t sleepy so he went upstairs, and down again, up, down, up, down. Jay did this every time he had absolutely nothing to do. When he got back to the glass sliding door of his owners mansion for the tenth time, he stopped. He looked over at their owner?s dog in the living room on the couch, Russell ?Ruffles? Bark Jr. He was awake. The siberian husky looked at him with steel-blue, dark and somewhat scary eyes. ?Don?t tell me.? Russell bark-whispered. Jay really searched in his head for no apparent reason. He jumped into a daydream. He has them a lot. He sees the future in them. This time he saw a pale amber cat with an epic-looking black patch shaped like a lightning bolt over his eye with intimidating yellow eyes in the backyard with him. He saw himself scratch the others paw and mew something. He saw the amber cat purr something softly. After that he saw himself meow something else. Then he saw, out of the forest, a flamey ginger tom with along with a long haired gray one. They talked for a while and set off in different directions. The daydream faded away and he woke.
Standing behind him on the floor was Polly and Hector, his parents. ?Salutations.? Purred Hector. Hector is a slightly gray cat with blue eyes, but Polly was a calico but mostly black with summer sun yellow eyes. Then Jay lay on the green velvety couch and forced his eyes closed once again, but this time, not interrupted by Heather.
Jay was woken. ?Hello, Jay.? Greeted the soft voice of his owner. Jay squinted because of the bright sun showering light on him showing from the glass sliding door and the windows.
That Sunday was like any other day. The eldest son, Jay Jr, was getting ready for his school football game.
Jay?s team was the Pensylvania Kittens. Though Jay didn?t name the team, Jay was moved by whoever invented the name.
For breakfast, the Meow family each had a bowl of Lorenzo?s Cat Food. For lunch, another one. For dinner, another one. After dinner though, Jay was still hungry. I?m gonna kill one of those mice that were squeaking last night and eat it. Thought Jay. He went outside to where the mice were squeaking last night. He saw a fat gray flash ahead of him. With a quick pounce, the mouse was in his hands. Just about as he was going to sink his teeth into the fat mouse something knocked him over. He turned around and saw a pale amber cat with yellow eyes and a black patch shaped like a lightning bolt over his eye. It?s the cat from my dream! Jay thought.
Jay knew what to do next. He walked over to him, almost nose to nose. He unsheathed his claws and dug them deep into the cat?s paw. ?Why are you here?? Jay said in a dark voice. ?Don?t worry kittypet, I won?t hurt you.? Purred the cat. ?Kittypet?? Jay meowed. Then out of the forest the flamey ginger tom and the longhaired gray tom came. ?Lightningpaw, what are you doing in Twoleg area?? The flamey tom said. ?Twolegs?? Jay asked in a serious voice.
?See, you ran right into a kittypet!? The ginger tom announced again. ?Indeed you did, Lightningpaw.? The gray tom spoke at last. ?Sorry Firestar, Graystripe.? Thunderpaw mewed. ?Hello, kittypet.? Said Firestar. ?Would you like to join our clan? I used to be a kittypet myself. I gave up my cushy life to join this clan. Would you like to do the same?? ?Um? Firestar, may I speak?? Mewed Lightningpaw. Firestar bowed his head in approval. ?This kittypet has no warrior blood.? Purred Lightningpaw softly. ?That?s what the apprentice that found me,? Firestar mewed, looking at Graystripe. ?said to me. But the leader made an acception, just for me. You are welcome to join our clan anytime young?? ?Jay.? Jay mewed. ?I have heard about clans. My parents told stories to me about them. I am awfully tired of my? kittypet life anyway. May I think about your offer?? ?You may. You have till sunhigh tomorrow.? Purred Firestar. With that, they both set out in different directions. Jay to his house, and the other cats, to the woods.
Jay got home in two tailswipes. First he asked Heather if she wanted to go. ?Heck, yeah! It?s so boring around here!? If Heather went, the kittens, James, Lindsay, Jennifer, and Xaivier had to so kittens, check. Heather, check. Next was Hector and Polly.
?Remember the clans you used to tell me about? Well? do you want to live in one?? Jay purred in question. It took his parents a long time to answer. ?Certainly not!? Meowed his parents at last. So it was decided.
The next day at sunhigh, Jay brought Heather and the kittens to the woods. Jay had another daydream. This one was short. He saw Graystripe and Firestar come out of the woods.
?Hello, friends.? Mewed Jay after the daydream. ?Nice skill you have. Is it your sense of smell or hear or sight?? Firestar purred, stepping out of the woods with Graystripe.
?No. I have daydreams that predict the future.? Meowed Jay. ?Interesting.? Purred firestar. ?I see you brought fri-? ?They?re my family, not friends.? Jay interrupted impatiently. ?Alright, no time to waste. Lets get to camp!? meowed Firestar.




Chapter 2: Midgetpaw
Firestar, Graystripe, Thunderpaw, Jay, Heather and the kits went on their way to ThunderClan camp.
As they went, Firestar meowed ?So I see you?re still a tom? ?Still a tom?? Jay questioned. ?When you go to the cutter or vet, you lose your strenth and get lazy.? Firstar mewed calmly. They went over fallen trees, pass through sharply fragrant pine trees, where they had to jump across deep gullies churned up by a Twoleg tree-eater. Outside back in his Twoleg nest, the Meows often heard it. One was too wide to jump, half-filled with slimy, foul-smelling water. The two clan members waded through but Firestar with a tiny bit of hesitation at first. The meows were used to water but not this kind.
The Meows all went, eyes squinted in disgust. After wading through the water, Firestar stood on top of a rock resting on the bank of a small ravine. ?Getting closer.? Firestar meowed. Then Firestar led the way, bravely going over the boulders followed by the Meows and Graystripe.
?We have arrived Jay and fri- family.? Firestar announced at a patch of gorse. Beyond the gorse there was a clearing.
Everyone went through. Jay was amazed. ?It?s just like my parents described it!? Jay purred. ?Exept for-? Jay couldn?t finish his sentence because of another daydream.
He saw cats come out of dens with confused looks on their faces and mewing nervously. He woke. ?They?re in their dens? Jay meowed impatiently.
Firestar and Graystripe nodded. Then, as known by Jay, the cats came out mewing ?Who are they?? Then Firestar jumped onto a big hard rock. ?We have new members of ThunderClan. They a kittypets.?
Firestar purred loudly. ?What?? A dark voice mewed from the crowd. ?Calm down, Brambleclaw, it?s okay.? Purred Firestar. ?No it?s not okay!? Meowed Brambleclaw, yelling now. ?Show yourself the great wandering kittypet!? Meowed Brambleclaw sarcasticly. Everyone made a path between Brambleclaw, a chocolate brown tom with amber eyes and the Meows. ?Oh, and look, their collars are still on.? ?Stay back guys.? Firepaw purred to the other Meows. ?I got this.?
Brambleclaw lunged at Jay, tackling him and just managing to pinch-bite him. Jay was furious. He was just about to unsheathe and swing one of his silver claws at Brambleclaw when he grabbed both of his paws, and was trying to bite his neck but got collar instead. Jay knew this would pull his collar off so he tugged with all of his might, managing to pull a paw free, grabbed Brambleclaw?s jaw and pushed his jaw even more closed.
He?s not letting go anytime soon. Jay thought. After that, Jay leaned his head back with force, closing his eyes and broke another unsheathed paw free and clawed Brambleclaw?s face.
Soon- Snap! Jay?s collar snapped in half. Jay finally opened his eyes and saw Brambleclaw?s face with claw marks and his nose split open horizantally.

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Mr. Meow, Bunny's BFF.

This all sounds vaguely fimiliar

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Drink up me hearties, yo ho!

I've said this multiple times.

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team bramblepaw

Thanks for the title change mods.

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Nobody likes it!!!! Im not suprised!!! If Chaobites ever makes a new awards then 1 category should be The weirdest member. Ill win it!!!!!! Hooray!!!!

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That post was pretty uncalled for.

Where did we say that we hated it?

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Spacing, use it.

The only warriors I like are the ones from that awesome 70s movie. Leather jackets > Cats

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Walter Sobchak: This is what happens
when you find a stranger in the Alps!

I don't even know what is going on in these forums anymore.

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I want my name to be Spaghetti

Shouldn't this be in the Studio?

Oops, yeah. KINAVARA!!!

Added after 12 Hours:

im gonna work on it

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