Okay, I've been designing and planning out a Webomic for quite some time now, but I have no idea what to call it!
So, I've found and created some names which may be good for it.
The Webcomic is a Steampunk Fantasy where you have Kingdoms and a few species like Humans, Lynxmen and Celestials.

The names so far are:

1.Forever Divided

2.Fallen Dreams

3.Fallen Ambitions

4.Guilty Past (Made a mistake in the Poll and said "Pasts")

I will post some pictures to sort of get your mind going.

Here is the main character, I haven't designed his clothing yet (Still working on that)

Here's the map.

Uh... Still making these, but they're Kingdom Symbols.

And there's Airships (This picture I'm still doing)

You can also give some suggestions as well if you want

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Forever devided, cause the split kingdoms and stuff.

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i'm with blits here. forever divided because you have all these different races. and because of the kingdom being divided.

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True, but there's a bit of the story I can't reveal because it's revealing to the ever so revealing story of revealingness, so yeah.

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hm, well since we can't hear the story how about you pick. you let the others submit there answers and based on that, you choose.

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Well either way, Forever Divided seems to be winning :P

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It's YOUR work so I think you should be the one giving it a name. And well, unless we know the story it's kinda hard to give it a name.

That is a good point. We can't really name it without the story.

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That's true, but I need the name before I finish the first two pages.
Technically I did supply the names, but I think Forever Divided is probably the best for this.

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Some new artwork I've done.

Updated the map, but it's still not done.

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Made some new posters, I've also decided to scrap the Banner Advert just above.



It's now called Forever/Divided.

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I look forward to reading!

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I love writing stories but I suck at comic art, however I love them anyway. I would have to know more about the story before picking a title.

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Pherhaps... The Punk's Journey? XD Ya know, since the whole steampunk thing?

Oh, wait... nvm, name already acquired.

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Heh heh, yeah.
What I didn't realize that my map kind of fits it anyway.


Although I can explain some of the history I have planned.

300 years before, there was a great war between the kingdoms.
There were 2 sides to this war, the Defenders and the Invaders.
Humans, Lynxmen and Fennis were the Defenders.
A kingdom that was named The Shadow Hand was the invaders from another world.
As the war ensued, the Defenders knew the inevitable that they would be defeated.
As a last and desperate attempt, they called upon the Celestials to help fight in the war.
The Celestials agreed on one condition, that the other races were not allowed to construct Airships.
Considering the circumstances, they had no other choice but to agree.
With the vast fleet of the Celestials, they pushed back the Shadow Hand to their fortress located on the bottom right of the map.
A Mage constructed a Statue temple and set himself inside it, he encased himself to create a Barrier preventing the Shadow Hand from leaving the Island.
And then the world knew peace.

It still needs some ironing out though.

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wow, your a great drawer!Wish i could draw like that!

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I like what I'm seeing of this thus far. The story is good, but as you said, could use some help here and there. I myself have a few suggestions on things, but I will not give it unless I know it is wanted.

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Sure, go ahead.
But one thing, look at this I drew a few months ago and THEN look at your Avatar. I can only imagine your face Fire Emblem Fan Character by ~geckohero17 on deviantART
Looks very similar.

Anyway, I've finished choosing both of their names.
The man is called Mathias and the Celestial Woman is called Athena.
I have also setup a site Forever/Divided - Front Cover

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Well, my only suggestion is changing the names for "Defenders" and "Invaders" and obviously adding to the back-story a bit, making it more elaborate.

What... the... heck? The armor is almost exactly the same and the face is a bit similar. How did that happen? XD A friend of mine made my character about a year ago when we started work on a FE7 hack. He made an HD version of the mug just recently.

Daaaang, what a coincidence.

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1. Invaders and Defenders are just the terms I used to describe each side XD
But there does need to be more elaborate history.

2. I couldn't believe my eyes at first when I saw your Avatar

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Oh, that was just description? My bad. >_> Ah, well. Good luck on this comic again! Hope to be reading it soon.

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Thanks

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I know the title is already established, but I like more "Fallen Dreams" As I understood, the price of Celestials' help was the abandoning of building Airships, but I think the desire and the dream of flying is very powerful in all races and very hard to abandon. Anyway, as I don't know the story, I can't say too much
I like the drawings a lot, they are very good.

Thanks
Although I may use Fallen Dreams as a chapter name instead

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The artwork (especially in the girl) reminds me a lot of sword art online. It's pretty good. The boy on the other hand... seems...bored or something... he is ok, bu if he is the main hero he needs some kind of twist...

The way he is looking at me ... it is like... "You wanna fight? I have a sword... but I don't really want to battle right now... I may go sleep, I am bored and tired...let the girl handle the rest..."

The eyes have to look more lively and the hair is way too simple for the main character.
The girl is really good though...

I hope it helped, this is just my humble opinion. It's not like I draw a lot of manga, but I have surely read and owned a lot.

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Yeah, it helped out.
Although I do agree he needs more zest in his eyes, but it's also to do with something that happened.

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Although the hair stays

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Okay, I'm back with a Background test now


Do you guys think the background fits in well?

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I like the background. Very good job once again!

The background is really nice.

About the boy's hair, it's not the style that is odd but the color. Can't you alter it just a little bit? It looks like mustard or something. Make it more... bright, more golden...

And it would be a good idea to add a subtle characteristic, a small scar, a tatoo, an earring, make him wear small shoulderpads...

I really like his hair behind his ears that look like wings though... That's a really nice touch! Oh, I know, you could make his hair silver so that they actually look like wings and his eyes blue or red...

Just throwing a bunch of ideas there, most of them won't really look that good but if you want you can try them...

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Maybe something to define his face would be a good idea, but I'm not sure about changing his eye or hair color.
(Eyes for a specific reason)

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