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Well i'm starting a new manga and I want to know what people think and maybe get a few opinions and suggestions. The comic does have to do about me, I want it to be a comedy. It'll mostly be ficiton but i'm also going to add real events. My name is Joel, so that'll be the main character, and Jak is the second main. He's a gargoyle that only I can see. No one else can see or hear him unless he allows them to, but he can touch/ interact with physical objects. Everyone would only see it as an object moving on its own unless he revealed himselr. But yeah, if people like it, i'll post more on here and Colors 3D

I like the manga effects and shading, looks really nice. As for the dialog, I'd say... Seems fine. Though it didn't make me chuckle, (which not many things do), I think that it will make the norm laugh. Good job!

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I love the art style and the dialogue is pretty funny. Looks great!

Here's some advice. Make a rough draft of the panels beforehand. A good manga/comic book artist makes sure the speech bubbles don't overlap with their drawings too much. Speech bubbles covering the drawings is a sign of bad planning.

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Indeed. There's a whole process in how-to arrange panels and speech bubbles.
@OP, u must make sure that the speech bubbles doesn't obstruct the things or characters you're trying to show to the audience.

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